21 Jan 2007
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History of the Beast Eater tribe
When the sky titans were all gone eventually their castles just broke down. Some of them however slid down into the valleys and remain there to this day. In one such valley near the remains of a castle live the tribe of Dozgrut Headbasher. He had remained tyrant of his tribe for 60 years with no one daring to challenge the huge tyrant. Dozgrut had sired a bull named Gorg. Dozgrut was worried because Gorg was becoming a quite literal huge threat. So the Tyrant thought up a plan to eliminate his son. Dozgrut got his second in command to get Gorg and tell him to meet Dozgrut in the castle. When told this Gorg was confused because no one had ever gone into the castle but he went in anyway. Right when he stepped inside, the massive doors shut behind him and he could faintly hear a booming laughter coming from the other side of the doors. Deciding there was nothing better to do Gorg started exploring. When he was walking down the hall Gorg heard a thumping noise coming from the main hall. Deciding to investigate Gorg walked into the hall. What he saw in there could only be described in one word........Chaos. Standing before him was a fifteen foot tall abomination of nature. It had thick white fur concealing massive muscles and a hide as thick as a elephants, huge spiked bone carapaces over it's forearms, Massive hands with claws that could tear apart a steam tank, and a huge bestial head with a crown of twisted horns. The thing turned and noticed Gorg. It opened it's mouth and let out a Howl revealing three rows of serated teeth. Before Gorg even had time to think the thing was upon him. He jumped instinctivly to the side narrowly avoiding a decapitation. Before he could recover from the first attack the creature swung at him again Gorg sidestepped only to have the creature lash out with his fot catching Gorg right in the chest. The blow sent Gorg smashing into the wall and the it's talons had ripped his sid eopen. Gorg blearily looked up on the wall and saw a metal torch in the wall.The creature looked at Gorg's body let out a howl and charged at him. Gorg jumped up grabbed the torch and chucked it the creature's head. The thing let out a bloodcudling scream and reached up to feel the torch sticking out of it's right eye. While the creature was dazed gorh ran off to the side of the creature and put his back up to a stalagmite coming up from thr ground. The creature turned and noticed Gorg it howled again and charged at him. Gork let the creature run ten paces then charged. He reached the creature in a matter of seconds and smashed his fist into the creatures knee instantly shattering it. The creature fell to the ground landing in it's face. Gorg turned and looked at the body of the creature. He looked at the sharp rock sticking out of it's back and smiled. He turned ad started to walk away when he felt a massive impact on his back. He put a hand on his back and felt the three long gashes pouring blood down his back. He turned back to the creature. It was balanced on it's one good knee, with a huge hole in the center of his chest, staring angrily at Gorg. Gorg looked on the ground and noticed a rock. He picked up the rock and chucked it at the beast with all his strength. It hit the Beasts right eye socket and went right through the back of ot's head spraying brains and grisle out the hole. The creature slumped to the ground finally dead. Gorg ripped off it's pelt and head. He draped the pelt over his shoulders like a cloak and ate the rest of the beast. When he was done feasting he grabbed a rock and smashed it's skull to powder. He spit into the powder and made it into a paste which he daubed on his face in the shape of a skull. He turned and left to find his father.Find revenge.
Gork walked through the camp bellowing out challenges to dozzgrut. Dozzgrut hearing this challenge grabbed his massive scimitar and hammer and walked out of his tent. He looked towards the bellowing and his worst fear was confirmed. His son had lived. before he could even oren his mouth to yell gorg smashed his fist into his jaw shattering it. Before he could even stumble backwards gorg smashedhis fist into dozzgrut's side smashing ribs and winding him. Gorg grabbed his father by the wrists and pulled as hard as he could ripping both arms out of their sockets in a spray of blood. Gorg kicked him to the ground and devoured his arms. He looked down at him blood dripping down his face. He glared hatefully at his fathers writhing corpse then smashed in his remaining ribs with an ironshod boot putting an end to it. He ripped off his head and waved it in the air bellowing out a challenge to all who dare oppose him. He looked around and saw Dozzgrut's irongut bodyguard stepping out of their tents. They bellowed back challenges then charged. Holding Dozzgrut's head by his hair he brought it down in an arc smashing the skull of the first irongut. he threw the grisly remains of his father's head at the next irongut's face. while the irongut was distracted by this he smashed his fist into his face breaking his nose and his neck. before it hit the ground he punched a fist into it's chest and ripped out it's heart and ate it. Gorg bent down and picked up his late father's weapons. He turned and faced the 10 remaining ironguts. He stared at them with a mix of contempt and bloodlust then chargd at them bellowing a war cry. he smashed into them swinging is weapons in deadly arcs smashing bones, skulls, and weapons with his hammer and cutting through flesh, armour, and bone with his scimitar. Such was the ferocity of the attack hat they were soon conealed by a cloud of dust and blood spray. When the dust cloud settled the scene before the rest of the tribe the scene was enough to make them never doubt Gorg's power. He was standing on a pile of mangled corpses blood dripping off his weapons with his bloody pelt flapping in the wind. He bellowed his victory and was answered by the rest of the tribe bellowing their support for their new tyrant. He stepped down and grabbed the husk of his father's body. He turned to the tribe "you lads take what you want "then he strode of to his late father's tent with his corpse. He turned and looked at the tribe "any of you lads want to die i'll be in my tent". And that is how the tribe of Gorg skullcrush beasteater the intelligent became.
the end
What do you guys think?
Sorry bout the length.
Thx to all who actually read it all
comments welcome.
History of the Beast Eater tribe
When the sky titans were all gone eventually their castles just broke down. Some of them however slid down into the valleys and remain there to this day. In one such valley near the remains of a castle live the tribe of Dozgrut Headbasher. He had remained tyrant of his tribe for 60 years with no one daring to challenge the huge tyrant. Dozgrut had sired a bull named Gorg. Dozgrut was worried because Gorg was becoming a quite literal huge threat. So the Tyrant thought up a plan to eliminate his son. Dozgrut got his second in command to get Gorg and tell him to meet Dozgrut in the castle. When told this Gorg was confused because no one had ever gone into the castle but he went in anyway. Right when he stepped inside, the massive doors shut behind him and he could faintly hear a booming laughter coming from the other side of the doors. Deciding there was nothing better to do Gorg started exploring. When he was walking down the hall Gorg heard a thumping noise coming from the main hall. Deciding to investigate Gorg walked into the hall. What he saw in there could only be described in one word........Chaos. Standing before him was a fifteen foot tall abomination of nature. It had thick white fur concealing massive muscles and a hide as thick as a elephants, huge spiked bone carapaces over it's forearms, Massive hands with claws that could tear apart a steam tank, and a huge bestial head with a crown of twisted horns. The thing turned and noticed Gorg. It opened it's mouth and let out a Howl revealing three rows of serated teeth. Before Gorg even had time to think the thing was upon him. He jumped instinctivly to the side narrowly avoiding a decapitation. Before he could recover from the first attack the creature swung at him again Gorg sidestepped only to have the creature lash out with his fot catching Gorg right in the chest. The blow sent Gorg smashing into the wall and the it's talons had ripped his sid eopen. Gorg blearily looked up on the wall and saw a metal torch in the wall.The creature looked at Gorg's body let out a howl and charged at him. Gorg jumped up grabbed the torch and chucked it the creature's head. The thing let out a bloodcudling scream and reached up to feel the torch sticking out of it's right eye. While the creature was dazed gorh ran off to the side of the creature and put his back up to a stalagmite coming up from thr ground. The creature turned and noticed Gorg it howled again and charged at him. Gork let the creature run ten paces then charged. He reached the creature in a matter of seconds and smashed his fist into the creatures knee instantly shattering it. The creature fell to the ground landing in it's face. Gorg turned and looked at the body of the creature. He looked at the sharp rock sticking out of it's back and smiled. He turned ad started to walk away when he felt a massive impact on his back. He put a hand on his back and felt the three long gashes pouring blood down his back. He turned back to the creature. It was balanced on it's one good knee, with a huge hole in the center of his chest, staring angrily at Gorg. Gorg looked on the ground and noticed a rock. He picked up the rock and chucked it at the beast with all his strength. It hit the Beasts right eye socket and went right through the back of ot's head spraying brains and grisle out the hole. The creature slumped to the ground finally dead. Gorg ripped off it's pelt and head. He draped the pelt over his shoulders like a cloak and ate the rest of the beast. When he was done feasting he grabbed a rock and smashed it's skull to powder. He spit into the powder and made it into a paste which he daubed on his face in the shape of a skull. He turned and left to find his father.Find revenge.
Gork walked through the camp bellowing out challenges to dozzgrut. Dozzgrut hearing this challenge grabbed his massive scimitar and hammer and walked out of his tent. He looked towards the bellowing and his worst fear was confirmed. His son had lived. before he could even oren his mouth to yell gorg smashed his fist into his jaw shattering it. Before he could even stumble backwards gorg smashedhis fist into dozzgrut's side smashing ribs and winding him. Gorg grabbed his father by the wrists and pulled as hard as he could ripping both arms out of their sockets in a spray of blood. Gorg kicked him to the ground and devoured his arms. He looked down at him blood dripping down his face. He glared hatefully at his fathers writhing corpse then smashed in his remaining ribs with an ironshod boot putting an end to it. He ripped off his head and waved it in the air bellowing out a challenge to all who dare oppose him. He looked around and saw Dozzgrut's irongut bodyguard stepping out of their tents. They bellowed back challenges then charged. Holding Dozzgrut's head by his hair he brought it down in an arc smashing the skull of the first irongut. he threw the grisly remains of his father's head at the next irongut's face. while the irongut was distracted by this he smashed his fist into his face breaking his nose and his neck. before it hit the ground he punched a fist into it's chest and ripped out it's heart and ate it. Gorg bent down and picked up his late father's weapons. He turned and faced the 10 remaining ironguts. He stared at them with a mix of contempt and bloodlust then chargd at them bellowing a war cry. he smashed into them swinging is weapons in deadly arcs smashing bones, skulls, and weapons with his hammer and cutting through flesh, armour, and bone with his scimitar. Such was the ferocity of the attack hat they were soon conealed by a cloud of dust and blood spray. When the dust cloud settled the scene before the rest of the tribe the scene was enough to make them never doubt Gorg's power. He was standing on a pile of mangled corpses blood dripping off his weapons with his bloody pelt flapping in the wind. He bellowed his victory and was answered by the rest of the tribe bellowing their support for their new tyrant. He stepped down and grabbed the husk of his father's body. He turned to the tribe "you lads take what you want "then he strode of to his late father's tent with his corpse. He turned and looked at the tribe "any of you lads want to die i'll be in my tent". And that is how the tribe of Gorg skullcrush beasteater the intelligent became.
the end
What do you guys think?
Sorry bout the length.
Thx to all who actually read it all
comments welcome.
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