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Nana's Story

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"Tell us a story Nana!"

"Ok how about the Elf story"

"No Nana, tell us about when you were our age.  Tell us how you came to Briggand"

The old lady paused.  "Thats a story for another day dear."

"Owww, you always say that, everytime we ask" cried out the twins in unison.  "Please tell us.  Daddy said we are old enough to know"

The grandmother looked over at her middleaged son.  He nodded and sat to hear the story again.  "Ok ill tell you a little bit, then bed ok?"

"Yes yes!" Exclaimed the excited girls.  The aged lady tucked them in and settled on a wooden stool between the straw beds.



They came at night.  My brother and I were asleep in the back room when we heard the first screams from our neighbours.

We jumped onto a hay bundle to peek out of the window.  The summer had been a hot one and we suspected it was another fire.  The Elders had sent men to our house earlier in the season to warn us of storing wood near the house, and keeping roads clear of debris.  Fire was devestating to a street of houses this close together.

The screams stopped.  I craned my neck to see more of the house.  There were no lanterns lit.  Mama had awoken and was tending to our little sister, Kella.

Then we saw it.  In the distance up the street right near the main gate a house collapsed into a pile of rubble.  A moment later we felt the shock in our feet.  My brother Aiden jumped off the hay and crossed the room for his sword.  He looked like a dwarf wielding a huge sword, but as this was Papa's time in the militia he had a duty to protect his family and house.

I watched him leave the room in grim silence and turned back to the window.  No fire, just a settling cloud of dust.  I heard raised voices from the front room, one of our neighbors from behind us had arrived at our door.  I squinted in the darkness to see the cause of the collapse - Then the second building was hit.

The Meat store was bombarded with shards of metal and rock.  The roof caved in but the structure held.  Lanterns were now appearing in many of the houses and worried faces appeared at windows.

As a hail of what looked like rusted weapons flew from right to left across the town and landed in the lower field the alarm sounded in the keep.  As the horn rang out, men young and old ran from their houses towards the fort.  Some kissing their loved ones others hurrying to dress or attach armour to their clothing.

I watched with horror as Aiden walked bravely past my window with his huge sword and a helmet that would not fit him for years to come.  His face was rigid.  He turned his back on the carnage and marched towards the keep. 

A crowd was gathering around the Meat store.  They were salvaging what they could from the wreckage and scattering into the night.

The Horn stopped and the fort doors lowered.  I opened the window the get a better look.  It was then that I heard the constant rumble from outside the main gate.  It sounded like thunder, but on the ground.  Our mother had told us that the Empire had all sorts of Magical people that can control the elements.  I expected that what was happening to us had a magical origin.  Surely nothing natural could make that noise.

As the door hit the ground our local troops marched out in rank with their finest suits of armour.  They displayed the towns colours and standard with pride as they walked up the street.  They were shouting to stay in our houses and find cover.  I ducked down and watched more than 40 men pass the window.

They were joined by four men on horseback.  The company halted as the Captain ordered the riders off towards the gate.  The men waited in silence.  Time seemed to stand still in the dim light of dozens of lanterns.

After a few minutes I saw a horse galloping back towards the unit of troops.  Its rider was missing and the horse did not slow down.  The captain stood in the way to reign in the beast and was thrown aside.  Something spooked that horse so much that it ran without purpose until it slammed into the keep gate.  It collapsed in a wail of painful cries.  Broken and dying. 

I looked back towards the men.  The Captain had been helped up and he was shouting orders.  Every house I looked at had a least one person pressed to the window.  Worried faces that did not know what was attacking their town.

The men marched towards the gate of the town.  As their footstep became quieter, the rumble grew louder.  It seemed to be coming from all around, but through the dust and darkness I could not see a thing.

I heard a warcry as in the distance the first few rows of our men surged forward levelling their pikes.  The cries quickly turned to screams and I saw bodies fly over the ranks of the remaining men.

The militia faltered slightly.  The captain issued no orders.  The rumbling stopped.  I was now balancing on my hands as I had pulled myself half out of the window when I saw the fire.

It came from the mouth of a monster!  A huge fat creature twice the size of our men and more than twice as wide.  The flames curled around the unit and lit up the street.  Maybe a dozen men lost heir lives and dropped to the ground, the rest of the men fled back to the keep.

The burning flames reflected our foe.  Fifty or more of these Giant monsters stood three wide in our small street.  They brandished huge weapons the length of a man and crude armour. 

One of monsters at the front held his hands up to his gaping maw and bellowed in a deep scratchy voice.  The ground thunder started again as the massive army moved further into our small town.

The Ogres had arrived....
AND?!... What happened next? Keep it coming. Very nice. I'm hooked!
Im glad you are hooked Clavicusevile.

This is a bed time story so you'll get the next installment when im babysitting again!
Awwwwwwww... Come on! Just five more minutes! :D
So... Ogres attacking an imperial city? Or just a settlement?

Either way, the story is good. (do keep an eye out for some gramatical errors ;>))
Previously .... On Nanas Story...

"The burning flames reflected our foe.  Fifty or more of these Giant monsters stood three wide in our small street.  They brandished huge weapons the length of a man and crude armour.

One of monsters at the front held his hands up to his gaping maw and bellowed in a deep scratchy voice.  The ground thunder started again as the massive army moved further into our small town.

The Ogres had arrived...."




Mama burst into the room and hissed at us to follow her.  I jumped down from the window and ran through the house to the side door.  The street was filled with people heading towards the Keep, mostly silent.  We had seen looters and the like before.  The keep had always protected us.  It had never been breeched.

I looked back down the road towards the source of the fire and saw the Ogres entering the houses in small groups.  If the owners were lucky they would be long gone.  The fire was slowly spreading along the right side of the street, we didnt have long.

When we reached the Keep entrance the guards were nowhere to be seen. I saw many faces I knew, all too scared to talk.  We were filling up the main entrance hall as the Iron door to the Keep proper was closed.  I could hear talk rumbling along our group of a guard or a key.

We were pushed further towards the locked door as the hall filled up with more town folk.  The rumble of the Ogres grew louder in my ears.  They were getting closer.

Suddenly a light came from the open doorway and a huge ball of fire thudded into the outside of the Keep.  Gasps turned to silence, then to screams as the two men holding the doors open were hit by flaming debris and set alight. 

Orders were shouted by many andthe two burning men were dragged inside and the door closed.  For those still outside we prayed.

Once the door slammed shut and barricaded the only light was from the wailing men on fire who were being helped by those nearest. Then darkness.  We sat and tried to listen for the Ogres, the militia, anything.  But the only sound was a hushed whisper here and there among us.

Then the whole room rocked to the sound of dozens of bangs.  It sounded like handguns only bigger.  Another thud and crash, we saw more light under crack of he door.  Then nothing.

My brother wept at the silence, I held his hand and looked on at the horror reflectefd in the faces of the hall. I heard shouting outside.  A military voice shouting and a monsters' voice responding.  This was followed by a cheer of men, and a low gut rumbling reply.  Our militia had arrived.

The hall fell silent again to hear the muffled cries and cheers through the heavy door.  The sounds I heard throughout that battle will haunt me for the rest of my days.  Sitting in the dark hearing every blow and feeling every thud of a body thrown against the keep walls was too much to take for some people.  They screamed and cried.  A group had taken to try and open the iron door with the few possessions they had brought with them.  A group of Elders had started praying in a circle in the middle of the hall.  Pleading to Sigmar for mercy.

The battle outside died down.  Cries ceased, the Bellowing to a murmer and the rumbling was decreasing.  Had we won?  Had the ogres fled or been killed?

Through the few lanterns that had now been lit I saw men at the door.  Looking at each other in confusion, their ears pressed up against the oak craning for the slightest sound.

'Knock Knock' hammered on the door.  The makeshft guards jumped.
"Friend or Foe?" one of them shouted.
'Knock knock' was the reply.
"Dont let them in!" a hysterical woman shouted
'Knock' Just once more then silence.
After a few minutes one of the doormen announced, "There's no Ogres walking around out there"

Mama held us tight as we listened to the Elders discuss our next move.  No one wanted to open the door but there were still families unaccounted for, and fathers and husbands from the Militia.

After 10 mins the silence outside was deafening.  The tension growing inside had caused a few arguments amongst people who wanted the door to be opened and those that were adamant it should stay closed.

The bickering gave way to a sound so loud I thought it was the end of the world.  A massive boom came from a long way away followed by a whoosing sound over our heads.  A second past then a crash of buildings behind us.

Mama looked up and started to say something but was drowned out by a second boom. This was the boom that doomed the small town of Ledgeworth.

The door blasted open in parts as a cannonball the size of a barrel flew into the hall.  People were tossed in all directions, we ran to help those that had fallen.

The whole hall was in panic now.  Some had taken up arms and were filing up by the remains of the door.  Others were blind with terror and screaming for death to take them. A few young men were clawing at the Iron keep door, their fingers in tatters.  Madness had taken them.

Wildcats the size of men leapt into the hall and attacked whoever was nearest.  Throwing the guards left and right.  I was crushed in a surge towards the back of the hall, taken right off my feet by screaming townfolk.

As the guards fought back and hacked away at the massive beasts a bellowing was heard from outside.  The Ogres smahed the remains of the door to pieces and fell over each other to get through the small opening.

I remember lifting my head from Mama's shoulder and watching a very large Ogre stand in the hall with a man in one hand and a sword in the other shouting a guttoral cry at the sky.  I was 40 paces away and through all the killing and dying I could smell its sweat and feel its anger.



"Then what happened Nana?"  One of the twins exclaimed.

"No, no thats enough for tonight." Nana said as she tucked them in for the night.

"Oh please, what happened to the people?  And them horrid Ogres?" The other asked.

The old lady paused.  "Maybe ill continue tomorrow night, if you get all your chores done." she winked.

The Father chuckled from his chair and turned down the oil lamp in the girls bedroom.  "Tomorrow evening it is then Mother.  Ill never tire of that story"

They smiled and left the room together, leaving the children to dream of Monsters and battles.........




It's interesting - but Nana is going to give those kids nightmares. Good story, though.


One or two slips in punctuation, but nothing so bad that it took away from the story or I didn't know what you meant. And you did a really good job writing first person talking past tense, then slipping to present... I always screw that up in my stuff.
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